1. Welcome back.
2. Strong first stanza. Sets the tone for cloudy, murky, precision in the crazy.
3. I love the line, “Wishing on stars to fall for me.” It’s cosmically tragic.
4. “wind chimes made of dusty whiskey bones,” sounds like something from The Ugly Organ. Great imagery.
5. What did you find behind the secret scowl of the blue sky?
6. Speak of the slithering snakes out loud.
7. You were destined for the long haul.
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1. Welcome back.
2. Strong first stanza. Sets the tone for cloudy, murky, precision in the crazy.
3. I love the line, “Wishing on stars to fall for me.” It’s cosmically tragic.
4. “wind chimes made of dusty whiskey bones,” sounds like something from The Ugly Organ. Great imagery.
5. What did you find behind the secret scowl of the blue sky?
6. Speak of the slithering snakes out loud.
7. You were destined for the long haul.